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Oh man this story gets more interesting and tense every time I read it, you managed to cheer me up and most importantly I wish you a happy birthday author-san, hopefully what you want can be achieved in the future and always healthy. Don't ever stop writing until this story is finished, my friend, even though there is a long pause or pause (mostly fanfics) I will always wait for your story, which I think is amazing.
Just wow, I have no words for all that happened in this chapter. I mean Reed is doomed(Yeah, I know some people could maybe do a play on words or something like that, but it´s a fact that this time Reed really screwed things up), the Fantastic 4 will lose some reputation and don´t really know how that would affect the Baxter Building. and to be honest I don´t know how the MC would fix things with Susan. But what most surprised me is when Peter lost control of himself in some way and the part of the spider legs, which if I would suppose it´s like an effect of the serum he injected himself. Question, would he notice it and try to control it?? Putting that aside, thanks for the chapter!!
I have some suggestions :- if he can use Dr. Connors research to add genes of various animals to himself to enhance his abilities ... then :- * Get some radiated eels , and study their DNA so he can strengthen his electricity powers * Mutate an ironclad beetle , and study its DNA so he can obtain their powerful defense of bio-armor * Mutate some moth or butterfly , so he can gain wings ....etc OR , To make it more like Spider-man , he can add those abilities indirectly ... like , fusing these DNA into spiders , and then fuse the spider's DNA into himself ...
The character development you do is pretty common in light novels. I think why it's rarely found in fanfictin because I think that method is quite annoying, by hurting the people closest to the MC for character development, therefore why do that in fanfiction if it can be made better without drama nonsense like that. yeah that's just my opinion