lingchenxi
Nice start dear, all the best
Your first chapter has the potential to hook the traders to read more and more. Keep updating
It's a good start
Okay, I'm very happy the book has been updated that it's not just one chapter. what would I have done?! Great start there...
what a start to a chapter... I really rode the confusion carousel with our lead female. it was very engaging.. loved it..now let's find out what this payback is all about
Seriously an interesting start!
Good, start enjoyed the first chapter.
good start for this chapter.
