Comments of chapter undefined of White Online

Yeah author is totally into the younger sister fetish.

How is a guard acting arrogantly when the guy is valued by his family. That is like speedrunning getting fired

Oof the family is rather cringy and clingy no? I'd go insane in such an environment.

Thanks for the Chapter~!!

Umm, what is this genetic pool they are pulling from. The family has everything, multiple hair colors mixed with multiple eye colors.

This is incredibly cringy. Superb writing is the humble glue that holds this dumpster fire together, the story's been threading a breaking point since chapter 1 mostly due to the blatant self insert character, who lacks a personality. I would also like to add that the MC "conversing" with his "younger sister" has to be the most unreal, unironicly banal sibling-sibling conversation ever. Alice is simply a fetishized 'waifu' meant to be protected by the MC, as only females willing to love this "fool" are his sister and his mother (no maidens?). Additionally there's nothing to anticipate (no tension) when the story's direction to boringly monologued by a blank slate 'father figure' [who just disappears when Alice enters the room btw] and the only feature that made the character seem mysterious and interesting (Being that his safety is threatened outside his home) is hinted to be caused by a immature and lackluster, romantic mishap :( instead of, idk, something cool? (copium). No edits, have it raw

Thx for the chapter

It started different from the others of same theme. It's looking good

thx for the chapter

thx for the chapter

👍

It seems like things are a lot more complex or complicated than I thought. Can’t wait to read more, keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁

I hope he picks Marksman and gets the Simo Haya (sorry if I misspelled it) legacy, frikin legend.

White online reminds me of something . He might get a character similar to white death a well know sniper shooter but who knows.

Hmm about thw bestfriend did she got raped?

He got raped by his best friend :v Alice is oddly lovely with mc sweet home Alabama

Gracias - Thanks

nofhing

it's a very nice novel

Will he get the legacy of the Finlandez sniper that was basically a 1 man army?(forgot his name but I really like him)