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Comments of chapter undefined of it's about power (by iman)

David_Holbrook
David_HolbrookLv1David_Holbrook

You need to figure out sentence structure in English cuz that's what I'm reading this as, the thing is when you are writing you're writing as if you're trying to one to One with the voice with a ancient Chinese guy that barely knows English are you going for stereotypical Asian mom trying to get her child to excel even beyond maximum and end up making a child have extremely extremely extremely low self-esteem end up getting the child into a gang because that self-esteem end up turning that child into a super villain because of that self-esteem if you don't feel good about yourself and your parents who are raising you who help you grow don't tell you that you are a good person that's you exceeded the limits in which you said that are a maximum potential for this specific task it makes a child think that it's an insignificant waste of space that should commit suicide and destroy all existence and other souls so it can be alone in it's inadequacy.

SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5SR_2027

Good ideas! wonder if you will continue to write more of these?

SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5SR_2027

Many people have biological force field. They can resist the external manipulation that is done to their bodies. Otherwise OP people can be killed like Cabbages.