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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel; My wife is Hela; Goddess of Death, Just Saiyan

jose_vega_4849
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Ayuda a algún héroe sin capa, en este sitio hay una historia muy similar a esta (protagonista sayajin , pareja de Hela, adoptado por Ben y May, es muy op, y le enseña a May, Ben, Peter, Buky y otros a usar ki, etc), pero no la agregue a la biblioteca y no puedo encontrarla si alguien sabe el nombre por favor me lo pasa😉

Elliot_Jackson
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I think it was my old story that I deleted, I might repost it as a new story after I finish this one.

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LastDragon77
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Time travel = Garbage.

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Spearow0
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Its horrible and terrible, either everything never happened or it should should matter but it does not, its pretty bad, most authors only use it once they run out of ideas and started to cannibalize their own story, destroying everything they ever stood for now that they have no new or good ideas.

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XAZVAPB0OTH
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Um lixo

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Chaos1
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depends on how you do it. it could be goor or bad.

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Brokedepressed
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Forget time travel. You’d be better off doing flashbacks of the past where your boy just started his hero work and going over those first

Gibinds
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personally hate time travel, think it screws things up more often than makes them better

pdusenbery
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time travel should be a no. but I can see how it could work if u use it as the reason hela was able to escape...

Dracul91
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ad long as it is done in a complete loop and not just thrown in for fun, it is alright.

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Aaron_Harvey_7275
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Interesting I guess, Naruto fans made a lot of them over at fanfiction.net which was really amazing, That's not to say I didn't see bad ones, but the good far outway them. You can do a lot of good with it if done right, mostly easy to do if you put forth the effort and know what you're doing.

Devastator_21
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I don't mind it but it does get confusing but as this is a db fanfic you coul use the time travel made in dbz

RemoteRomance
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No!