Comments of chapter undefined of The rise of the pervert primordial

Definitely prefer the quotes, it was hard to separate dialogue from the narration before

yups it easer a loooot easer to read " for conversations. and ' for thoughts to make it easer as well, but not as necessary.

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁

Imperial topaz look nice, I'm a sucker for opals, especially fire opala amd black opals so i hope one girl gets an opal.

finally some quotes

cat fight indeed good let goo >:3

nice chap

thanks for the chapter

Kkkkkk

They say that hope is the last thing to be lost and I want to believe in your story but the characters do not convey anything, they seem empty and even the mc who is supposed to be the main focus of the novel has no character and seems so generic that he fails to create No empathy (at least that's how I feel)

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

well.. it's easier like this, readers can focus on the story

Thanks for the chapter

author you are psychic, you can only post my constructive criticism comment. "author, no offense, but you can put parenthesis or quotes in the paragraphs of speech, because it's kind of hard to read your FF. PS: I really like your FF."