While the grammar is so so, i can definitly see this is well thought through, good details aswell (like the stabbing in war to see if the corpses are really dead)
Thanks for the chapter! Just found this story and this first chapter is an interesting start to the story - I'll be reading more to see what happens next!
Where ur says “I saw those things dragging the people that are barely alive…..” it should be “ I saw those things dragging people….” The ‘the’ isnt supposed to be there. :) just advice