Rysangel
Sorry I withheld my thoughts about this story for the last 20 chapters... At the beginning I really loved this story it was straight up nice to enjoy even with the crush from Sakura for him and all his crazy power gains. But with the end of the Chuninexam the story has only gone down a powerful spiral of self destruction and doom. The story isnt going anywhere anymore you give him even more powers which can literally bring back life and lie through anything which could bring questions. Then the thing in the first sentence Hokage office in suna... Dude you are not even trying there đ I have read other story's from you and enjoy those as well but his one is getting really bad lately! I hope it might get better again but as I said I waited for 20 chapters to say anything and there is no getting better in sight so please lovely author hear my plight and change the story again for the better.
Yeah this is all over the place. What organization? Why would he just make that up. Its super incriminating and he could have just been honest. No idea why he even has to hide his identity. Its like EVERY other novel. 1 hide identity, 2 make new fake identity for travel, 3 fake identity gets supee famous, 4 MC fights someone he cant beat with his signature powers, 5 MC uses his powers and everyonw figures out it was him and his fame explodes again. so boring, so lame. i really liked this story too.