Comments of chapter undefined of A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)
A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)
Saintbarbido
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unique concept of trying to be cultivator in non-cultivator world instead of using cliche system. i think you should continue to build up on this and complete it till the end. its a fanfiction, so changing some facts and how the things work is under your control. everyone has different tastes, so it is inevitable that some would leave discouraging reviews. In my opinion, as long as mc doesnt becomes a "great power, great responsibility " type hero and focus on his selfish development, it is good.
Epic really like the concept, cultivators are truly broken, there is like this own personal system they have that helps them evolve For example in doulou dalu once you become a god or a 3rd class god you become a 4th dimentional being, and once youre a king god you become a 5th dimentional being If we put those terms in marvel terms they are close or even higher than the 5 cosmic beings and OAA, of course i dont know if it is close or stronger but that doesnt matter the point was made Keep the good job đ
Uh.. he knows Peter was bitten by the spider, right? And he knows the spider upgrades Peter's physique, right? Why exactly is he so surprised and bothered by Peter being taller..? Just makes me think mc is an idiot. By the way, I've been wondering.. mc sees the way the energy goes to Peter's brain and makes him much smarter, why hasn't he tried to use some of that energy to make himself smarter?
