Comments of chapter undefined of Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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you keep saying the mc doesn't care but remember only him is immortal! plus you even wrote the word one-piece like there's not enough reason for the govt to silence the mc! if the WG doesn't do anything about the mc then that is a serious plot armor! it doesn't make sense. You have a good concept about the power and background but there's a serious plot hole in your story. it would have been better if you would tell luffy's story after they experience every adventure they're supposed to experience, like being a reporter of their adventure through manga so the govt can't do any cover up or another concept like making different manga but not the story of one-piece. so sorry but I'll drop this story.
Thx for chapter !!:) you should make it so when the shop levels up he can also add defensives on the outside of the shop like Turrets so he can protect the villiage the shop is in :) that would be coolđđđ˝also cool idea would be security cameras in the area or something that can record stuff that is happening for example (one of his cameras catch a Corrupt navy member abusing power you can start selling all kinda of news from his shop since world goverment cant get rid of it :) that would be actually a dope ideađđđ˝
I find it interesting that the MC doesn't care about the future, after all or almost all the fanfics out there the protagonist follows the 'plot' in one way or another so it's quite refreshing to read something outside the "cliche" trope ", although I still think that selling the future story can force many enemies into mc(wouldn't it be strange for the world government to put spies on the island that lufy and Ace(who shouldn't even live because of his mother's information being revealed)) so that when they appear they eliminate future threats. There is also the fact that the mc cannot make many volumes, Oda took 22 years? (I think) to reach cap 1030, considering that the canon starts 20 years later so it wouldn't be It's surprising that I would have to fill in more unique content in the work. I'm very interested in the work. Thanks for the chapter
