JosieGan
I think it's been going good so far, but i still don't see Tian activating his bloodline and other stuff... I think it should have happened by now. Anyways, for the Sect arc, i think it would be nice if Tian also took time to spend with his wife and girls. Some progressiom with Suya, Chen Xue and Xiang Yin wouldn't hurt, especially Chen Xue. Other than that, prolonguing the Arc to add more details and develop the characters would also be nice. I don't mind him adding several new women as long as they don't feel like artificial pokemons. Tian could also give a Jade to Qilian to meet him in Ancient Sacred Realm.. Afterall, the safest place for her would be by his side in his realm. Can't believe he never even thought of that. I also wouldn't mind seeing more of that Mother Daughter pair he meets in the sect hehe, especially the mother. You don't have to add more plot to the Arc itself, but by adding some Slice-of-life in it, you can feel in some gaps while making the story lighter and him stronger. Would also be nice if Yunzhi got better treatment
i hope u don't add more women but i know u will but i will ask u not to add many and i want u to have tian and other women to grow closer and strengthen their relationship then adding more women plus i wish u can do same to that demon princess u did to liu girl. Don't make her his slave because being his slave is very big thing
The sect arc shouldn't have too many young Master personalities always causing problems. focus on developing relations with people who haven't committed to him. Slice of Life it, but develope his strength. There shouldn't be too many women as it can be hard to keep track of. Especially with the translation of him, her, he and she being mixed up often. His brother should be reincarnated as well. There should be male friends he makes. As the saying goes, too much of one thing is never a good thing. There hasn't been positive interaction with male characters of his current age. It would be a breath of fresh air. Even if it's just guiding him in cultivation
I think the only thing I would suggest is that you adjust Long Tian's reincarnation, or lack thereof, a bit. My reasoning is based on the issue of his lineage, i.e., his kids. I have 2 suggestions that you could play with:1. The Alchemy of Souls route. I don't know if you've seen the show, but essentially, one's lineage is tied to the soul, not the body. The body can add or adjust things, but ultimately, the soul is most important. In this way, even though the body belongs to the 'original' Xia Tian, any child he may have in the future is genetically the child of Long Tian. The child could still inherit any beneficial traits of the 'original' Xia Tian. 2. The Original Xia Tian is just a fragmented part of Long Tian's soul that somehow went through proper reincarnation and developed its own personality and life. Until whatever happened that led to Long Tian's main soul occupying the body instead of being destroyed due to the forbidden technique he used to resurrect his wife. This way, Xia Tian and Long Tian are individually unique yet still the same person. So the kids would genetically be tied to Long Tian either way.You could make it so Bai Yinyue as the oracle can't see the true nature of it because of her seals. If you did anything similar to these suggestions already, I apologize. I'm currently on chapter 361 and haven't read ahead. I only made these suggestions because of Bai Yinyue's thoughts on the matter at the end of ch. 344. Plus, my one distaste with body 'possession' stories is tied to this. I can elaborate more if you want.
in previous novel his brother died, so if you dont let him die and make him better, as it will be good support for MC as his old friends died and he need more support. Also for XIa xing mother's part, you can make it interesting by not directly accepting by his brother as no one wants his mother to be married by his cousin, and later he accepts by understanding his mother feelings.