Lord_Sadness
Making a livings nice. You have pretty good grammar and writing style, though I do notice some misspellings. I'm happy to say that your story is both exciting and intriguing, so you do you. Anyways... I'm very glad with the ab woman, I want more and more yandere. As many as you are willing to write. Especially since she isn't a prisoner and will probably be even more involved in Cane's life.
My opinion is that yandere stories with it as the main topic are not for everyone. Your writing is great but the topic is niche, not everyone can handle torture or enjoy overly obsessive love. What I’m trying to say is—and this is just my thoughts and logic—it’s unlikely to make a stable living outta this.