Joao132135
wow.. so many psycopath here.. as bad as sakura, she is still innocent in sense, also your OC , kaede ? is she doing some heavy crime that you kill her at young age ? is sakura, perhaps murder elderly people ? or mindless killing innocent that you all in joy and made happy party to killing her ? wow, just wow... i dont mind killing as long as he/she is criminals, pedophile worth of torture before killing him/her. Ràpīst also the same. but killing innocent just because your mc need decoy and for plot..? this is so disturbing,, is his past life is murderer psycopath or sociopath ? yes, he is slime/monster now, but as his past life as human at least give him morals that does not kill innocent. ahhh, dont reply this,, im just idiot nagging.
Why didn't you just use the carnage symbiot? It would fit more with this. There is no humor like there was reincarnatance as a slime. And yes, you made the girl a psychopath, not a sociopath. You said you would get dark, not stupid. This is an idiotic idea, really, It's always going to be traced back to her Eventually. Unless you plan on having her be the ultimate master Mind working behind the scenes, oh my God. Ultimate polar armor nobody can detect me. Working behind the scenes gets boring.