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Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson and the Hard-Working Mortal

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Dio99
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I'm going to wait a few chapters before I make a review but soo far this story is really unique. I have never seen a mortal in Percy Jackson fanfic before. I have high hopes, please don't drop.

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MightyOzy
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-Mortals can learn magic and how to manipulate the mist. -they can also be blessed by a god which will give them aboltiies, or even become a champion of a god,( slightly stronger abilities than their progeny) -in various patheons its shown that mortals can become stronger than gods and slay them. -you can learn cultivation from chinese, indian, japanese and korean pantheons that focus on using worlds natural energy to temper the body. -mortals and your better mind woll allow uou to practice more martial arts. weapon throwing( like axes or kunai or throwing knives) Take inspiration from fate franchise and how mortals could kill gods.

RavenClock
RavenClockLv4RavenClock

Yes mom i am being bullied that's why I'm learning fencing! I mean seriously 😒 how on earth sword fighting would help you defend yourself from bullies

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Seraphel
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thanks for the chapter

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

Okay, grammar could use some work, and really fencing 😑

Jack_Frost_3962
Jack_Frost_3962Lv4Jack_Frost_3962

great chapter

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Dao_Master211
Dao_Master211Lv6Dao_Master211

A Mortal in Percy Jackson how original. I hope he becomes so skilled in something like a sword or spear and magic just like Scatach where she is only mortal but can kill Gods. The Greeks/Romans ain't the only pantheon in that Universe maybe you can insert them like the Celtics so he can learn under Scathach.

LUCIFER_20
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Thanks for the chapter