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Comments of chapter undefined of Apocalypse Cheater

WhySoSerious
WhySoSeriousLv6WhySoSerious

its kind of narrator start lol. give life to character , my advice.

WhySoSerious
WhySoSeriousLv6WhySoSerious

what i mean is. youre the character.

demon_king69
demon_king69Lv1demon_king69

certainly it's a good start, although it could have been better if his death was described a bit more

EternalCodex
EternalCodexLv4EternalCodex

About my recent comment, I said it for a few parts. So don't mind it. And I was not taunting you either. Instead, I encourage you to use it. It's available and legal too so why not?Because I really like your story after reading this chapter and the thing that I liked the most was the word count of the chapter.That was massive dude. That's all.....for now. Stay safe and healthy .

Triple_x
Triple_xLv10Triple_x

is this lnces? because she's a single woman it seems...

Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2Xiaoyunyun

This is a prime example of how not to do an emotional scenes. This chapter was a pure waste of time.

KnightOfDeath
KnightOfDeathLv15KnightOfDeath

Do we ever get a physical description of the Mc and his mom? I've been looking cause I can't remember reading one

festival_night_89
festival_night_89Lv14festival_night_89

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Mike_Buttowski_5008
Mike_Buttowski_5008Lv3Mike_Buttowski_5008

Do you have a discord?

Mozzy_da
Mozzy_daLv14Mozzy_da

Tftc!

Bobainox
BobainoxLv4Bobainox

KKH
KKHLv4KKH

thanks for the chapter

Lord_KronosxX
Lord_KronosxXLv3Lord_KronosxX

Tftc