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Comments of chapter undefined of [DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue

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Sephtis_Azrael
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I like the ending bit...even tho u did take it from someone else.....I'm sure the guy won't mind....

Chaos_dragon
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I know... it's just that when you said who?? I I was confused for a moment... all good!!

Ashtar29:Oh lol, you had me panicking. He's cool with it he even helped me with things considering I'm a writer. And one more thing, check the synopsis, please. đŸ€Ł

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Gentelman
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Good chapter

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SHEOGORATH
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Nice

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MrRando146
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Hmm okay this is a promising start

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ErozothDraeor
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For first chapter: Decent, balanced, not overblown origin story to be ignored on second chapter. Good job.

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abcfucku
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nice first chap

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giornoo
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First chapter APPROVED. Hope to read more sooon

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Alex_Nova
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Is it odd I find it hard to connect with a black Mc when half my own family is black?

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MistofOblivion
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Thanks for the chapter 💖

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JustANewGuy
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Good start man keep going!

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Deisy_Marin
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LittleVamp
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Thanks for the chapter Author â˜ș

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5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

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Shoggoth
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Thanks for the chapter! đŸ’Ș(‘ω’đŸ’Ș)

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Supes
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nice

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VermillionAce
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I see you also use the thought of the characters in the end of the chapter... Just life Fiction...

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GawS
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thanks for the chapter 👍👍

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Celestial_S13
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Intersesting

DaoistCharubdis
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obviously either Mrs. Weasley has dementia or they yelled specifically to be found by Potter

Anurag_Kumar_1739
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Where did other siblings arrived when his father is dead.sus