Comments of chapter undefined of Zenitsu Template In One Piece

my only problem is quotation marks

I think you could try to develop a stronger personality for kane, who knows like busujima from highschool of the dead? she is a great point of reference. By the way, try to improve the Interactions, they seem a bit unnatural, and make the girl stop blushing at anything, the story has potential, I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.

yes, practice quotations and punctuation a bit and you are good to go..

frankly the story is incredible especially the race of the Mc is well chosen but why there is no mark to tell us these words and these thoughts??😡