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Comments of chapter undefined of Survival of a Loner MARVEL

BugsyToots
BugsyTootsLv5BugsyToots

Develop your story more and come back to the idea of romance later on. You might find it easier to write in the romance when you have developed your characters more.

Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

I say no, as you said you are bad at romance and the way you have made this Mc, it's not a good idea to have romance here, cause as you said, it will look cringe, and Mc' character himself would not allow him to have good romance.

I3ishop
I3ishopLv5I3ishop

I like a bit of romantic subplot in a story maybe x-23 or Rogue honestly as long as it's not Jean or Gwen Stacy I'll be happy I'm sick of reading about those two.

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Yes wanda , it could be interesting to see a scarlrt witch yandere with his mental problems and all

Akash_Ahmad_9398
Akash_Ahmad_9398Lv4Akash_Ahmad_9398

No romance

Garahel
GarahelLv5Garahel

Wanda

Darlyn_Corcino
Darlyn_CorcinoLv3Darlyn_Corcino

No to romance.

dad_Best
dad_BestLv4dad_Best

no harem and no romance

Erubey
ErubeyLv2Erubey

No romance

Champion_collector
Champion_collectorLv13Champion_collector

X-23 or rogue

YourFriend1yReader
YourFriend1yReaderLv3YourFriend1yReader

No Romance! I mean it IS called Survival of a loner right?

Ambrose_Allen
Ambrose_AllenLv15Ambrose_Allen

someone who will join him ride or die type of deal no betrayals or indecisiveness

Kotaku
KotakuLv4Kotaku

i would say do a harem without romance basically with interesting girls he meets but without much focus like having lots of lovers/girlfriends linked by common interests and the fact that if you don't nerf the mc he will become good at everything basically the dream that someone would want as a boyfriend

0TheFool0
0TheFool0Lv20TheFool0

Author, the very title of the Fic says that the MC is a loner, he may have a few affairs with a few different women, but he must remain alone.

Muko
MukoLv1Muko

Yes, X-23.

Saiyan_Of_God
Saiyan_Of_GodLv3Saiyan_Of_God

I say harem time.

daoistofeverything
daoistofeverythingAuthordaoistofeverything

Is anyone gonna answer the Patreon question?

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

The MC shouldn't WANT romance. He's literally still coming from an abusive household he lived in all his life ON TOP of being bullied / ignored by everyone at school. It shouldn't even be in his mentality to WANT a girlfriend or to except a girl to like him.

codyleewanless
codyleewanlessLv13codyleewanless

no romance because he is a loner and if you say you're not good at romance it definitely will be cringe.

Abomkv001
Abomkv001Lv1Abomkv001

Harem

Shiro92
Shiro92Lv4Shiro92

Wanda... Rouge...