Comments of chapter undefined of In This Corner Of The Multiverse

so you just gonna ditch her character in star wars with the clone I see.

I know it's not my decision to make but I would like him to bring Ashoka with his real body. Somehow it doesn't feel like he is repenting if he left her with basically a clone.

Ok, this makes up for all the neglect Ashoka has been through. Previously it felt like Ashoka just disappeared, forgotten, all their banters and all their cute, wholesome, sometimes cringy moments gone, reduced to atoms. Now this chapter made a great closure, not perfect but great and I don't know how to make it perfect but it just feels like something is missing yet I can't find what it is.

if I may ask how close are to next universe jump and may I dare ask which one I remember you saying Goku but not sure

I honestly get what you're trying to do with this but it still irks me when I see someone take the easy way out and give a "clone of the mc" to a love interest, 'sighs' this kinda turns me off from the story whenever i see it, left multiple fics and stories due to it...it's really a shame she's such an awesome character to be left with a pretend version of the mc, regardless how you word it, that's what it is, if you have the harem tag just embrace it... but I digress its your story I guess..

not the best decision you made here author. you can't just post two ending in the same novel. you need to choose the good one among the two and delete the other one. and BTW neither of the two ending is impressive (also what up with the spoiler bs?). Anyway thanks for the chapters and trying to make a good story. peace out.

Like darth vader said once NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooo

I want ACTION!!!

Wonderful chapter, but the ending was kinda strange, reminds me a bit of the ending of renegade immortal. I just want to see now if the mc will go back to her and make her immortal? or she will die with the clone in the Star Wars universe.

Thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

Entonces embarazastes de su yo futuro espero que esto no se vuelva a complicar en el futuro por que si no tendria que embarazarla 2 veces xd

Meh/ Tank yu for the chapter(?)

So the mc just left her in the star wars as he f**ks wanda? d**k move tbh

In many ways this is good, in some others it's worse. I choose to see this as good since she won't be pulled into his other nonsense.

Thanks for the chapter

Great chapter

The main thing is that there is no harem (no more than 1 love interest), and so, everything seems good.