Comments of chapter undefined of In This Corner Of The Multiverse

Its just that you made his act a bit too childish in the previous chapters. Like if he was really from the outer rim he would develop into a ruthless person fighting tooth and nail for every opportunity/resources and maybe become manipulative. Think about it would they suspect him of trying to manipulate them and having anterior motives? I think so.

Please make him adequate and not an idiot who lives only because of the plot, I understand that this work has already been abandoned but still, you make a Chinese character who constantly meets enemies where they should not be in principle, if he is just stupid he leave him like that or make him equal to his knowledge and not a stupid vegetable with a library in his brain

Please prevent anakin from going to the dark side, I don't know what plans you will have for him but I hope it doesn't end as badly as in the universe of heroes

Big brain mc

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Tank yu for the chapter

Jedi fight training what a twist.

thanks for the chapter

thx for the chap

Thanks

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thanks for the chapter

love the story, he could probably hit up stargate Atlantis for ancient tech, they have the zpms, imagine a portal gun run off that and then they have the dna resequencer tech, ancient powers etc.

Thanks for the chapter