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Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

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DaoistIdXsIO
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I like your story. My only problem would be the status window takes up a large part of the chapter

DaoistIdXsIO
DaoistIdXsIOLv3DaoistIdXsIO

I wasn't trying to be critical or something but just trying to explain how it looks like to me. A lot decent fics ended up being half filled with the status page. How long does it take you to keep track of and update the status every chapter?

MonkWithAPen:a usual chapter consists of 2k - 2.5k words.(without status or skill list.) since This chapter has status and skill list I've added added another 1000 words to the chapter. this chapter (chap.24) has a total of 3.2k words.

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DEFIANTSAGE
DEFIANTSAGELv4DEFIANTSAGE

Bruh, everytime these stories add mana on top of chakra, it goes bad. Unless mana is nature chakra, please dont add it.

Standy_Victorov
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... ok some math. Let's see. 1year has 52 weeks. 52×3=156 points each year. 156×6=936 points from the quest for the whole 6 years. Now about hobbys. Why is there no gardening? Given that he was managing the garden for a whole year and will keep doing that I thought that it would become a hobby as well instead of some kind of menial job.... Also if painting and cooking gives points then where are the point gains from gardening? Dex maybe? Also he should have gained plant knowledge, right? Herbology for example.... another thing. Why is persistence still locked? Given that from what is shown our guy has a workout moreI harsh than even rock lee. And he still is not considered persistent?..... Now a question. Will daichi learn the 8 gates? Rock Lee didn't had any talent. He didn't even met gai sensei(his instructor) until his later years in the academy. So basically his true training start began very late in his years. Now we have daichi. The gamer. Who also has as much will to train(and maybe even more) just like Lee. True he will have less time to train physically than Lee (because of all the other fields) but given who daichi is I think he shouldn't have a problem in keeping up with Lee..... And now the elephant in the room when will daichi learn shadow clone? It is pretty obvious that chakra control is his strongest point at the moment. Plus kensei is a jonin so be should be able to use the jutsu. He also wants to help daichi in becoming the strongest. What better way to help him than giving him the shadow clone jutsu? He just needs to deem daichi capable of performing it. So I will ask again. When will daichi learn the shadow clone?

D1vineMonarch
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Has the mc tried to play? placing bets, playing dice, flipping a coin and trying to hit heads or tails? this would probably unlock the "luck" stat. and the training , the mc already started to train with weights ? although theoretically lifting weights harms growth, he has the "Gamer Body" so it wouldn't have any negative consequences.

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system
systemLv4system

Thanks for the chapter author San 😀 please keep up the good work 😀

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SladeOfWolf
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Thanks

Sammhy
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Damage reduction by 170% basically. If the reduction only decreases against people who have a higher level, does this mean that those who have the same or lower level barely cause any damage, be it energy damage or physical damage? Also, author, have you forgotten one of the senses? You could have created the skill related to it as well and combine them all into a new skill. And one thing I remembered, you could have made the character create some kind of stealth skill, it's not very difficult considering the way you learned the other skills. And the strangest thing about this chapter would be the presence of mana, why would magical energy be in a world of pure chakra and natural energy? I also thought that the protagonist has an affinity with all chakra natures due to his player body, after all, there is nothing that the player cannot learn.

Miguel_Sayjin
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are you going to put mana in naruto?

cyberlector
cyberlectorLv5cyberlector

gracias por el capitulo

Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5Goldenswiftreader

Druid ninja for da fun. Will he be learning Chakra touch anytime soon?

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter.

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

Mr_even
Mr_evenLv6Mr_even

mc x hinata

Vasiliy
VasiliyLv4Vasiliy

Thansk for the chapter

Jack_Frost_3962
Jack_Frost_3962Lv4Jack_Frost_3962

good chapter

Crowly
CrowlyLv6Crowly

thanks for the chapter

Teeni93
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thank you for chapter :)