Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

Good 1st chapter. Pretty Solid base. MC character background is a bit cliche but not bad. Not Harem is a major plus. Good job. Keep going.

The grammar is actually more than acceptable, but while I personally have no issue there will be others who are more strict. Overall I'm more interested as how the story will progress, and hopefully by the end you would have reached the best ending you could have wished for :)

Thanks for sharing this with us Author-san

good start and good luck with this story

Hinata

The author deletes the low reviews. loads fake high reviews.The novel turns out to be good at first, then garbage.

Exp

UmU

Mc is brainless

Is the system similar to Solo Leveling??? I hope it doesn't make the MC too OP at a young age...

Wow… I hated that. The mundane character background, the listless lifestyle that’s suddenly interrupted, the terminal illness that I have a particular dislike for… and finally the cat of calamity that is implied to have instigated the car crash in order to force the MC into compliance. The grammar and writing style seemed fine but the plot itself 😑 I just hope this was due to the rough nature of the story’s beginning and not a bad omen of things to come.

Let’s see

i dont really get why at this point people still use this type of opening, can they just say he got isekaid by something end of conclusion. At this point people already know how LOL

the author removes low reviews. BE VIGILANT AND CAREFUL!!!!!!!

skipped nearly everything.

Thanks

the writing of the chapter was amazing. this hook of a chapter is a knock out for me, it's a very well written one. I think that cancer is a very hard subject and it really pulls in people who have seen what cancer can do. well written, an amazing emotional pull and what a great start to a naruto novel!

como eu gosto desse tipo de história sempre alegra o meu fim de noite