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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter - The Northern Son (TES Crossover)

Wyatterp1
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ya

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Emerson_Leite
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Always blood, any HP fanfic, I need your blood.... kkkkkk. poor man, thank goodness that each fic is a different verse and HP, otherwise he would be a mummy.

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WolfStar612
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Really like this…. like a lot.

5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

ErozothDraeor
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A few details I find confusing. Lost a leg or legs? What's there now, wood or is he floating? How long has he been there? Time line seemed to me 2-3 month, before that he was an abused child, no school, no life, no love. Now he acts like a little genius, borderline scheming reincarnator, seems beyond extreme change in that much time. A year would not be much. How old is he? It made it seem, from some details, he should be 7-8 tops. Considering he just started in this world it doesn't seem like this is going to be Hogwarts story, its fine, but then why Harry Potter, pure click bait?

Viktor_Valburnt
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Next chapter is the conclusion to this Arc - just commenting here as a post note, but I edited all chapters so far that needed some of that polish. No major changes were done - just organized more, and corrected some errors; this just so that I may continue on to the second Arc without any regrets.