Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated at Level Two Million
Reincarnated at Level Two Million
Alphachoas
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Maybe a stalker is stalking them while they talking as they talk. Something was amongst them while they were among them. I wonder who were there, sitting behind a tree over there, maybe a beast, maybe they lunch or feast under this unbearable cold fire heat and that's what I eat for lunch and dinner, M.E.A.T and no vegetarian can stop a hungry carnivore and turn them into a omnivore inside a motherboard. (What am I saying)
first, the selective memory became pointless. You could have written that the goddess never even gave him that. Next, even if all those memories came back, I dont think it the feelings should be as bad as it was the first time as his body have a new type of emotion. What should have happened was confusion and uncertainty. And with the wisdom of an old man returning after the memory elapse. He definitely shouldn't have said anything regarding his past, or at least he could have made it vague due to the sudden burst of memory which should have made him confused. This here instead, was poor executed in all ways. The worst is that he would have fainted due to shock and not a weak level Mage forcefully put him to sleep with a magic spell. The excuse of low magic resistance is bad. No matter how weak a level 2mil magic resistance is, it cannot be something that a low level Mage ot even up to 1% of his power can bypass. The fact he can even bypass his power to activate his skills even though allowed was badly written aslo. There are other ways to write this scene. At worst it should have been through trials an errors.
