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Comments of chapter undefined of My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead

bixe
bixeLv4bixe

great chapter! however i do suggest that you change the way your paragraphs are formed. they seem to be mostly one run on sentence that doesn’t necessarily need to be. it would make the story flow a bit better and you wouldn’t be forced to use and or but so often to continue the single sentence going. thanks for the hard work!

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B0ssu
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Good luck with being a simp, Bell. Ya just got to deal with Loki and the crazy yandere goddess. And Hestia be like

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000Striker000
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Here's some more ideas I had; • Rabbit foot + Hoarse shoe + 4 leaf clover = Extreme Luck bracelet • Leash + Collar + Magic stones = Slave/Taming collar • Water + Herbs + Magic stones = Healing potions • Divining rod + Map + Money = Updating Treasure Map • Boots + Rabbit foot + Bird corpse = Hermes Boots • Mask + Chameleon + Magic stones = 100 faces mask/ identity hiding • Boxers + piece of armour + Magic stones = Family jewels protector • Stick + Straw + Magic stone = Magic toothbrush • Mint leaves + Rock Salt + Iris flower = Toothpaste(fact -this was the first ever Toothpaste formula) • Wood(paper) + Aloe + Magic stone = Magic toilet paper • Multiple blank books + feather pens + Magic stone = Connected Magic books (Medieval texting 😆)

Alexia_Possible
Alexia_PossibleLv4Alexia_Possible

Plz add a skill for being hestia lover or a magic involving the hearth

Gomtuu76
Gomtuu76Lv4Gomtuu76

Ohhhhh the possibilities are endless... I am curious can he like fuse Hestia blood with his own to become like a demigod?

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

RaijinGod
RaijinGodLv11RaijinGod

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁

Zachariah_Browning
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He should build a wall around the Church’s plot of land and start growing herbs, fruits, and vegetables in front and a training area in the back

Argelicano309
Argelicano309Lv11Argelicano309

No entendi la ultima parte correctamente. El Mc pregunto si no le importaba su relación con hestia, pero bell responde que no le gustaba hestia el contexto no concuerda

Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Good

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the Chapter

AvidReader962
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Thanks for the chapter

Hwanje
HwanjeLv11Hwanje

Epic

S1L3N7M4N
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DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Why not use her blood agian

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Dezel00
Dezel00Lv3Dezel00

Thanks for the chapter

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Suzuha_Yuu
Suzuha_YuuLv5Suzuha_Yuu

thanks for the chapter