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Comments of chapter undefined of Enjoying life in twilight

LinciPa
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Nice

One_Trik_Jester
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Okay so part of me is seeing Alice leaving the Cullens too, obviously if they are mates then Jasper will follow too, but Im not sure if they would join Damon and Rosalie or go on their own. If they're smart they would since part of the reason why the Volturi couldnt just take Alice is that their Coven is pretty big and they couldnt move a large part of their Coven without other vampires knowing which would ruin their image. But I honestly think they might because like Alice said, what he did was pretty merciful when it could have been worse

Jonathanjtj
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As Damon said, Carlile was never a good leader, he always put Edward first before thinking about his other "children". So sooner or later this coven would come undone by Edward's stupid tendencies. For God's sake, he thought leaving the Bella alone would help her, when they had a vampire after them in revenge. Anyway, I highly suggest that Alice and Jasper leave this group, I would give two options: the alaska coven, where the trio of blondes are or with Damon and Rosalie. You can make Alice have a vision where she becomes happy in Damon's coven, maybe having children and becoming a vampire like Rosalie is becoming.

Khors
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👍

BloodyWolfgirl
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what Edward did is stupid like why would he do that after what Carlisle told them not to do it and knowing that it was wrong and not his place to tell Damon secret to Bela.

Juto
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Thanks for the chapter!

bazooka84
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thanks for the chapter i already wait for the next release

Hill28
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Thanks for the chap. Keep the good work

Green_Monkey
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Thanks for the chapter

Justteve
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if alice and jasper do leave the cullens i support then joining damon and rosalie they could make a coven also thank you for the chapter !

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

marcosk00
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JokesOnYou
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Thanks for the chapter hope Alice and jasper either leaves or joins the mc and start a new group. Enjoying the read👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Shoggoth
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Thanks for the chapter! 💪(‘ω’💪)

MARCOS_NERIS
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Razxiel
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thanks for the chapter

DaoistaxMkIL
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thanks for the chapter

Daemanuel
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Este curso de las acontecimientos se está volviendo muy estúpido. Se nota que el autor odia a Edward y actúa como un niño al tomar decisiones estúpidas. Vamos a ver viven en la actualidad, me da igual que es vampiro o hombre lobo original o lo que tú quieras, Edward solo tiene que ir a la policía y se acabó con la vida de Damon. Hay leyes en el mundo real, la gente no va cortando brazos y torturando gente a plena luz del día sin ser asesinos y locos, que al final acaban en la cárcel o cazados por otros seres sobrenaturales. Tu ten en cuenta que los cullen no son tan débiles y tienen amigos. El poder se le subió a la cabeza a Damon y actúa como un joven maestro de novelas de cultivación . Madura un poco. Y en fin Rosalie si no recuerdo mal, a pesar de ser un reina de hielo, nunca hubiera dejado que esto pasará. Me da igual que sean pareja predestinadas, vivió más tiempo con los cullen y fue salvada por ellos como para elegir a Damon nada más verlo. Además de todo Rosalie en verdad creo que le tomaría mucho tiempo aceptar a Damon como su pareja. No es niña de 15 años para decir, uff que caliente el será mi novio aunque sea un hombre lobo, no es bella al tomar decisiones estúpidas por sus hormonas o curiosidad. Ella es una chica madura con cientos de años de edad. Esto es muy forzado. Me gusta tu idea de hacerlos que queden juntos, pero me hubiera gustado que esto fuera más maduro. Hasta ahora parece escrito por un crío. Espero que mejores en los próximos capítulos Un saludo y mi respeto por estar escribiendo.

DRACONIAN619
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thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Ibraahim16
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When the chapter dropping?