Comments of chapter undefined of Reversal

To me at least this book is one of my favorite books. I'm always checking for a new chapter so keep it up

Very good novel. I think you should write POVs too. You should try giving his women more women's pride like how we men have, like how we don't want to share our woman. It will make the story more interesting when you add hatred, jealousy, envy and greed in it.

I love the story it's awesome. but I have a question I think he got a cursed sword or something under the church will he ever use that?

I love this novel. It’s really good, but I have to ask early on during his coma vision of the future didn’t he hear some supernatural entity treating him like her son will we get more of that?

Alright, its a really good story. I know you have an editor, but some mistakes are still coming through. As for the story, I like the pov changes, and would love to see more of them. Maybe take a couple of chapters and go through a bunch of different povs and show what they are doing while Christian has fun in Russia. Elise, to me is a great choice, and I really want one with Helen, she shows to be smart enough to have her own thoughts. I want to see one with pride and meeting her father, or Lila telling her family that she will be giving birth to the next level of humans. How about Hailey talking to Maya, about his christian ate her up, and Maya could ask for her turn. But most of all, I want more savage! I need the wolf guy to eat some girls!

No input for me to really add, but if I were to say something I would say that I think Christian is still kind of naive about how the world works and just naive in general (but I mean does it really matter since he has all the resources to bend the world to his will, idk I just wanted to share). Helen was also such a great decision to add in the story and Elisa was the perfect choice to be the first one to give birth. I think being a father would surely help Christian get rid of his naivety. Anyways always looking forward to more chapters, thanks for the ride so far.

I'll be clear and straight, The story is great, the flow is great, Definitely one of my favourite novel but...... there's a big problem with the usage of he and she, it always becomes hotch potch with their mixup. Also, many a times women don't act like the men we have in our society so look for that too. I would love to see a lot more interactions with lila, I find her interesting. Other than these, this is the best novel for me.

the story is great and I love all the characters except a few. The grammar is good. I'm satisfied with the story Thank you❤

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I love this novel, even the occasional grammatical mistakes are ignorable, but people use paragraph comments to point them out and you never check them

this is one of my favorites so its goood

I love this story it is always interesting maybe he could try to do something with space

to me this book is very unique, it's hard to find mc have a child, and the plot is perfect, I like the mc, I'm very tired with harem seeking, but lacking plot just bang every women he sees

I love your story it's very good with Grammer and very little mistakes but I'm satisfied with your work👍🤍

Amazing story! One of my fav books on WebNovel

all good ...

;D, this is a great novel! i read many novels with guys in world dominated by guys but you created an original guy for live in that type of world, not just a normal guy , maybe a normal guy with particular circunstances

Keep up the good work.

the book is good and some plots have turn of events that I didn't expect and yes I would like to see some pic from other characters in the story in what they did when we last saw them. in case of mc dad or the the grandmother and even the sister of eva[img=recommend][img=recommend]other than that it's a great story of a reverse world I read