Honestly author, you had me scared that you dropped the novel and went escaping into the darkness, never to be seen or heard from again. But I'm glad that isn't true.

Hey author. I will give you an objective opinion not weighted by emotions. You have been constantly growing as a writer and it shows in the book. At first it was just interesting, but now you can submerge yourself in the storyline and get lost in it. I genuinely believe that with some adjustments that this book could be published and be in bookstores. That being said, never stop learning, and never stop growing.

Great book and I love reading it but unfortunately with you going premium it is too expensive to read. the cost of buying coins is ridiculous. It's an unfortunate thing and I wish you the best author. I've been here since the start and have enjoyed the world you have brought to life. It saddens me to see another wonderful book fall into the pay-to-read section but I hope they made you an offer worthy of your work

just a quick question to the author, why is this fight so prolonged? it's been 15 chapters I think. it almost feels like filler chapters considering the title of the book and the origional purpose of the system

I need more

lol I'm glad to see someone has some humor

I bet you were the kid in school to remind the teacher about homework

I was literally about to ask about this

did you ever think that Ragnar from Vikings was inspired by the story of Olaf?

Author it has been far too long since you last updated. I demand you post more content and if you don't I shall steal all of Will's gold

it's one thing to be inspired but this is a direct ripoff event for event from the story.

when your trying to make your word count

I look forward to seeing how far you can take this and just remember, there is nothing wrong with taking a break to figure things out as long as you let people know that you are coming back. That's honestly the best way to keep readers long term, is to let them know that your just as invested as they are.

So many of the older readers on here my recognize me but it's rare that I leave reviews, mostly because the works published here don't meet my standards. I can say with certainty though, that this book, is a true work of art. Though not as much content as others, it has great potential to be an incredible story. Author, I hope you keep writing this story to the best of your ability because up to this point, it has been an absolute joy to read. My one piece of advice, if possible, update more often.

well here goes another one of my favorite books. into the depths of premium pay-to-read. well I wish you the best of luck author

to my knowledge no

so it seems the author is not coming back

For anyone who wishes to read this novel, IT IS NOT IN ENGLISH. I'm not sure why the synopsis is but the book itself is not. I hope the author can translate this to English or find someone who can help them do this

In my opinion, this is one of the best kingdom building novels I've read so far. although it has less than 100 chapters it is still very captivating and we'll designed. Keep it up author