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Comments of chapter undefined of I Will Protect You This Time

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Krysbe
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@Haru_minami I'm disappointed at the mention of revising the story. More than anything it shows a lack of self confidence .So far the story has been really good (not sure if I am reading the already revised or not). Yes, this solid flashback is a little long, but I have faith that there is a purpose to it . However, overall, you've done a great job on creating your own world while giving homage to some of your favorite stories (yes, I caught Igneel!). Keep at it and don't let us readers know your flaws. If you need to do retcons, pm me and let me know (I may have some suggestions on how to do it).

Haru_Minami
Haru_MinamiAuthorHaru_Minami

Pfft. Thanks for that, it cheered me up a lot in a way. And about revising the story, it's because of some grammar errors and all. You see, this is my first story. So there's bound to be many mistakes. I was just trying to correct those mistakes. Anyways, thanks for the comment .