Haru_Minami
@Haru_minami I'm disappointed at the mention of revising the story. More than anything it shows a lack of self confidence .So far the story has been really good (not sure if I am reading the already revised or not). Yes, this solid flashback is a little long, but I have faith that there is a purpose to it . However, overall, you've done a great job on creating your own world while giving homage to some of your favorite stories (yes, I caught Igneel!). Keep at it and don't let us readers know your flaws. If you need to do retcons, pm me and let me know (I may have some suggestions on how to do it).