Very good, but skip the bonus chapters/side stories. They can wait until the end. If it's on the same timeline but from a different perspective that's though.

I'm being sarcastic here...implying that whatsherface wants to plan to kill Nan Hua (not that it would work, but not the point at this moment).

Since it's only been 3 days, I encourage you to reread it after it's been edited.

oh, the author notes 😆😆 I loved the mini side show! Still, I'm curious what general is attacking elsewhere ..

and this is why you have to fully thaw and partially dry a turkey before deep frying it... the explosion of hot oil hitting the gas burner is a terrible combination!

Sorohana you mentioned it's still ongoing... I think you're going to break your personal record by double at this rate! I love this book! I also hope The Villain's Cat will have as many chapters as this! Here's to wishing you the best of luck as an author !

oh man.. I can smell the vinegar! And yet, poor, poor Kate is clueless... everyone else gets it though... Marc may not and Robby doesn't count .

yes, but you still have a lot generals from the next generation and the generals after that will be more amazing (General Long Xing Qian for example).

He is a great author 😊 I recommend you take a break from this and then come back a reread chapters as they are being proofread.

This is hinted at from chapter 2 when the crystal knew him but he didn't know the crystal.

We are currently working on going through and proofreading chapters. Since you've just started, I recommend you go back and read the previous two chapters for better clarification.

That's going to get hard if he can't put stuff in... so many crystals ..they can't possibly collect and carry them all without Kate.

So subtly possessive. So attractive! He knows how to treat her right, even if it's not what he wants.... for now anyway.

She's such an amazing friend. I just feel bad for her. There's only so much one person can take.

flying pigs, flying boys...eh, semantics.

She might have deserved that .

Oh my word... it's not some peerless beauty?! Well color me impressed!!

C'mon Kate, even if you're a cat and don't need a bath, he's not... you do NOT want to smell that "teen spirit" smell mixed with sweaty man ... it's NOT attractive.

Aww... he's trying so hard not to let her know that he's a little (ok, a LOT)... darkly possessive.

Many older conglomerates are actually names after the founder(s), regardless of the market, such as Wal-Mart, Ingersoll-Rand, Ford, Walt Disney, and many others. I probably would have gone this route except that absolutely no last names have been mentioned (I guess you could have used/created his parents' names).