Comments of chapter undefined of Dream Training : The Champions

Dream Training : The Champions

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Mark_Muturi_6111Lv12Mark_Muturi_6111

As long as it's a parallel world with original characters... I usually hate novels that uplift the MC and downplay achievements of real life characters

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Agis_Z99AuthorAgis_Z99

well, it's not really original character. its like another version of real life characters. in the later chapter, many real life character i added in the story.

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Just4PlankLv3Just4Plank

grammar is bad, but it's definitely something a person can improve on. and it'll depend solely on the author, high hopes.

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D_RegalInsomniacLv13D_RegalInsomniac

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Dredd44Lv13Dredd44

editing or grammar could be better.

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GreendemonLv12Greendemon

Interesting, always loved these Kind if stories.

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ElviniaTheElfLv13ElviniaTheElf

Oh How am I first?

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KHINGJAY_413Lv15KHINGJAY_413

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KHINGJAY_413Lv15KHINGJAY_413

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KHINGJAY_413Lv15KHINGJAY_413

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Azure_LeopardKingLv14Azure_LeopardKing

So his name is just Kazuki? No surname?

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D_RegalInsomniacLv13D_RegalInsomniac

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MYTH_Lv4MYTH_

thanks for sharing this with us author-san

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El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

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Sau11Lv14Sau11

thx for chapter

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KenYotsubaLv1KenYotsuba

Thanks for the chapter.

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