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Comments of chapter undefined of Astral Apostle

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Astral Apostle

Qi Peijia

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dns7950
dns7950Lv10dns7950

I thought I was having a stroke trying to read this. What is wrong with this chapter, was the translator drunk for part of it? Needs editing.

2yr
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Eboy_Adolfo
Eboy_AdolfoLv11Eboy_Adolfo

Some paragraphs are cut in half, I guess you can bring that up to the guy who's posting the chapter. Would be nice if you touch up certain sentences or stanzas on their grammar, don't get me wrong, they're decent but could be a little bit better. Happy to see no grammatical errors so that's a plus Keep up the good work man

chuchutrain:hey man, let me know what you think was bad about the chapter! I'm always keen to learn and improve my own translations. I'm defo not the best out there and that's why i will always welcome advice :) but formatting wise, its out of my hands haha because I dont upload the chapters cos i can't see how the sentences will look like on phone and stuff
2yr
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Chaos_5196
Chaos_5196Lv13Chaos_5196

Already really like this mc because of this decision

2yr
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BloodPunisher
BloodPunisherLv13BloodPunisher

The heartless one is his family and he took a good decision.

1yr
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Vampfan1
Vampfan1Lv13Vampfan1

I'd at least arrange some method of letting his younger siblings be able to get in touch with him if there was a need.

2yr
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DEVA616
DEVA616Lv4DEVA616

nice extremely decisive

2yr
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kaadusc
kaaduscLv5kaadusc

I was really afraid he would go the 'filial piety' route

1yr
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Kitty2Coven
Kitty2CovenLv15Kitty2Coven

2yr
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Kitty2Coven
Kitty2CovenLv15Kitty2Coven

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

2yr
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RedKaizer
RedKaizerLv12RedKaizer

What his little siblings?

1yr
Saladinxc
SaladinxcLv13Saladinxc

Eh, he just do it like American .no rule no nothing. just get out after 18. What's so special about that . Either way Chinese already throw their filial piety value decades ago .

1yr
Megusta
MegustaLv11Megusta

I hope he doesn’t disown his younger siblings after this

1yr
No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

Thanks a lot

1yr
darkeky
darkekyLv15darkeky

good job 👍🏻

1yr
ChaosRain2582
ChaosRain2582Lv15ChaosRain2582

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

2yr
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