Comments of chapter undefined of Astral Apostle

I'm going to preemptively declare this story as "Too Good to be Picked". We all know it's going to have quality writing and an actual TL, which means it's obviously not going to have enough votes like many other quality stories in these past few batches....

Easily the best novel we have had up for trial read for a long time, which means it won't be selected, only novels with quick powerups, no worldbuilding, no story and bad translation get selected in 2022.

I wonder will he be alive after this? Or will he wake up back home

,,The world in his eyes seemed to slow down to a crawl. He could even see the White Spider’s smallest movements as if multiple afterimages appeared as it made its next move. He had predicted every single movement!,, HOW

,,You look very handsome when you charge forward but are you really not afraid of death?!,, Another bad sentence instead of ,,very handsome,, it makes more sense if it was: ,,You might look cool when you charge forward alone but are you not afraid of death?!,,

This is the best one of this batch.

There are to many stupid sentences that either do not make sense or just do not fit. Disappointed consider that this has a Translator and even more Disappointed of this was really just how it was translated.

,,Who is that? Are they suicidal? Their movements were fierce, though!,, When everyone saw that it was Zhou Jing, their expressions changed.,, The first sentence does not make sense consider that only Mc did attack the sentence would be more logical of it was: ,,Who is that? Is he suicidal? His movements were fierce, though!,,

. sSs 💤🌟. * . [ (-.-) ] 🌙 —o-o—* | 💗💗 |. ✨* | 💗💗 |*. Thank you... for the chapter... ......from Jack......

and he scores 😂

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