Comments of chapter undefined of One Last System
One Last System
MotivatedSloth
Chapter comments15
I can understand his obstinate hate of slavery but, instead going through all this theatrics, he could just accept her as a slave and... just treat her well? like it doesn't really matter how you start the deal, what matters is how you act after. it just feels a little over the top and moral purist to me but its okay
He acts so smart, analytical, etc, and then just does something he knows is dumb because why not...yea you're definitely going to dominate the world you know nothing about just because you have a system, so it makes complete sense to offend a power you know nothing about. Nice job making a decision based on nothing after all that other analysis. This is a pretty bad method by the author to have a smart mc and also get him into the usual cliche trouble with a young master, etc. Not a good start to this novel
so far this sounds like it has the potential to be a good story. only if the mc stops with his countinous assmtions, inner monlaging, and over the top thinking. so far in this scene he face a few setiuation, that we dont get clear answers for, bc he goes on too much on assuming and over analyzing. what are the results of the cryistal. he thinks soo much that it goes from one subjict to another, he doesnt try to ask qustions to understand, he just thinks way to much about none sencecal things, until others provide information, which could or couldnt help him, then he goes on another flight of fancey assuming, and congncturing about the setuation. where it would have been just a lot easer to just ask a stright qustion to get a stright answer and move, and he can stop linking ants colany habits to gods machnations. so asying all this the story can go from 3 starts to 5 imo, with less inner monlogaing, and more comuncations. as u lnow humans use words to comuncate. not inner monloage and esp to get info.
