Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar: Awakened Gamer

Sokka knowing that the Evil Lady will find loopholes, so he intentionally puts loopholes that he knows she'll see as loopholes she can exploit but actually have loopholes he can take advantage of:

I hate the fact that Gamers can only equip one title at the time, why would that be the case? You earn a title and you own it, its not like there's an imaginary slot for it, its a part of who you are and what you represent, so they should be all active at the same time. If I ever write a gamer fanfic I'll make sure to break this stupid tradition.

On another note, I find it extremely weird that the MC has not received Earth bending and Fire bending after the myriad interactions he had with the two factions but got the Water one for the simplest of the quests and the Blood one without even actually bending blood as he only manipulated the water in the blood of the monster he slew, the fact that you are "forcing" a certain pattern of development literally jumps off the page, it truly is illogical that he doesn't have them yet. By those standards, shouldn't he be able to acquire them by just trying to exert some sort of interaction/control over some random patch of earth or lit flame? That's an inconsistency that has been bothering me ever since he got the blood manipulation and having put up with it long enough, I decided it was time to present it to you. Are you doing this on purpose to avoid him being some sort of Avatar 2.0 with no restrictions and even faster and better mastery? Because honestly with the Gamer System he should just be that regardless of the plans you have for Aang in this story.

An entire chapter continuously explaining the many dangers of keeping an insane and undefeatable enemy alive and enslaved. MC enslaves her anyway. Everyone that has or will say something like "chill, it's holyjoker and you know he has a reason". it doesn't help at all, I KNOW the MC won't die horribly because of his choice, no matter how likely it is that it backfires. Thats not a comforting thought, its just more ridiculous plot armor.

I gotta say, I’m Pretty sure this would be a mistake since their is just too much we don’t Know about Spirits as a whole. Honestly should have just killed her as it is far too risky to keep her alive. Keeping her alive is brings a definite benefit, but there is just too much unknown, from the possibility That her existence as a spirit might lessen the effects of the Geis or the possibility that the Spirit world might affect it in some way. I mean we have already been shown that she does not HAVE to instantly follow a command, given that Sokka had to tell her twice to go to the Spirit World, it honestly annoys me that the Author threw this in and because he did that, I’m pretty sure that what he mentioned will in fact happen. She will find a Loophole, but by then He will be too powerful for her to do anything, which kinda kills my enjoyment of the story a little.

Why leave any loopholes at all? She's literally bargaining for her life. All the contract really has say is something like- The Individual who signs this contract will henceforth obey all orders of their master; whom they will be unable to inflict harm neither directly or indirectly... She'd just think that the next 60 or so years are going to suck... Still it's just a matter of waiting out what she thinks is his natural lifespan.

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Have invisible ink with clauses that would punish her for taking any bait loopholes. There's really nothing like a devil's contract. He can even use her own words against her. Using her own definition of I'll be your slave.

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

thx for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Tiene un espíritu candente en la mochila.

And would forget what the contract was about and what was on it

Contract: User will be able to ask of anything from the soul bound( Evil lady ) the soul bound will not be able to think of betrayal neither scheme the contractor or anything to do with breaking out of the contract nor be able to kill itself and will be able to be hypnotized whenever the Contractor wishes to by only snapping twice and won't be able to come close to him unless told too.

sokka mad

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thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter! <3