HolyJoker
Honestly i like the story and will continue to read it bUt Its disappointing That you have giveEn him another cheet. gamer System alone is broken chat group Is not neeed but i can see how yoUr trying to Work it out. Now the gacha While i do like gatcha fics i feel like your just adding random systems to the chrater to make him op Without Any real need for it.
So so good nice marvelous magnificent excellent extraordinary pure gold Man i think these are all the words which are present at the top of my head to give to this chapter And please please dont drop this novel by saying the cliche line (because of readers comments ) because i have seen plenty of good works end just like that so please aim for something like (sis con dimensional chat group )