NunuXD
Ok here is my opinion and not a review. 1. Arthur boring character in 13 chapters he doesn't do anything 2. The Beta testers are cool and their reactions in realistic The magic system and world-building can be done just like a game. You have the blueprint from your fanfic just make it the same with this story. Just sub the Marvel characters with geeks. Make a story for the player from the MC perspective and make him afraid of the players. Remember the player can RAID. Make the Players fear the MC and the WORLD fear the Players. You can also read the Legendary Mechanic and see a road to build a guild. hope this helps and good luck with the contract. You do have a talent for writing.