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_Khaled_

_Khaled_

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I like to write short fanfics since no one does the ideas that I have in my mind :)

2019-04-10 JoinedSaudi Arabia
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_3d
    Commented

    maiden? Really?

    Lin Yi didn't respond and walked straight into the hall. Yu Niang, who was attending to the guests, changed her expression slightly after seeing him. She immediately put on a smile and leaned towards Lin Yi, "Master Lin, you're here. Which maiden will you choose tonight?"
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    The Path of Survivor begins with obtaining titles
    Eastern · Ice and fire wither away
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_5d
    Commented

    Take the money from the corpses

    Gu Yang returned to the caravan and said: "Dispose of the body. Also, since we encountered bandits this time, you will have to pay more when we get back."
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    My Life Can Be Infinitely Simulated
    Eastern · New Booth
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_7d
    Commented

    should have sent to luck

    Major Fate changed= 7
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    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_27d
    Commented

    I think namek ones don’t do that

    Porunga holds up and 'OK' sign before disappearing, the Dragon Balls flying into the air and scattering throughout the planet.
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented

    Bro is yapping

    "It's rude to point at people. Weren't you two young ladies taught manners? As for you, fellow young master with an ass for a mouth, what my battlemaid does or says has nothing to do with you. Us pair of master and servant do not value your opinion. But if you were looking for attention by bullying my maid, I do have advice for you. Next time open your mouth in a gathering where your footlickers are gathered, and you'll get it. I do not like to bicker with fools, but I made an exception just for you three. I hope this experience has been enlightening. You don't need to thank me for this. Adieu," Valerius calmly butchered the trio with his glib tongue.
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    I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!
    Fantasy · DurcalAka
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented

    Wasn’t he a unique demon? Why does he need to he in a dungeon

    Mark's face turned cold, and he also noticed one vital aspect. The small hair that flew stuck to the javelin was instantly burned into ashes as it passed within a five-meter radius.
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    Mind Demon's Path of Domination
    Fantasy · CoughBlood
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented
    [Mind: 2.0/2.4]
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    Mind Demon's Path of Domination
    Fantasy · CoughBlood
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented

    What about teaching them to hide their Ki so they wont be discovered ?

    For the next few hours, I help get my family and friends settled into their new houses. They weren't all that lavish, but neither were the accommodations on Planet Vegeta, so they will be just fine.
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented
    "Don't forget us, Kakarot!"
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented

    Save the good ones and the rest can perish

    "There's no wrong answer. We either save Planet Vegeta or let it be destroyed. Which are you going to choose?"
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented
    "They're not clones." Cooler spoke, grabbing the attention of Dore and Neiz. "He's moving so fast that it appears to be multiple of him."
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_1mth
    Commented

    Logia is an obvious NO, Paramecia like gravity, teleport,telekeesis would be good

    I would like to know what your thoughts about MC getting a devil fruit is, if he should get one or not, if yes then what would be a good fit ?even non cañon fruit can be considered, please share me your thoughts on comments.
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    ONE PIECE : BROTHERHOOD
    Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Posted

    (Heavy Spoilers) Dislikes: -Traders: Apart from Ochirmaru the MC hasn't traded with anyone else worth noting, I would love to see him trade with Aizen or Kisuke from bleach, Dr.Gero from Dragon Ball, Frieza from Dragon ball. Or more one piece material(They were many mentions of Doffy with his nickname Joker but nothing that important) -The powers, MC through his trading system acquired many power systems(Like chakra from naruto ...) and it became very hard to keep track of all of them, I would have enjoyed it more If the story was heavily focused on famous power systems like chakra. -Unique abilites: Apart from the Sharingan the MC didn't recieve any unique ability, Anything he bought either was an item to boost his strength or a technique, In my opinion it would have been better if he bought a devil fruit or a stand or a transformation Apart from what I mentioned everything is good, the pace(I think canon just started at chapter 57) , Diaougle.... In shorter terms I hope the mc would get more unique abilites and trade with anyone noteworthy other than the snake pedo

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    In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk
    Anime & Comics · blazuki
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Commented

    No

    "Is letting them go really a good idea?"
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    Dragonball : Super Raditz
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Commented

    Did you forgot that you got killed?

    "I'll take care of the androids for you, both in the future and if need be, in the past as well."
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    Dragonball : Super Raditz
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Commented

    🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    Raditz's didn't fly up here, no, he was standing on a machine and floating upwards, very much like an elevator.
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    Dragonball : Super Raditz
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Commented

    So Aizen and itachi are waiting for the other to make their move?

    Ch 72 Chapter 70 - Premeditated Move
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    Crows x Souls
    Anime & Comics · QuackVader
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Replied to Fuka1

    What a braindead comment, your name probably sounds complicated to them and they’d prefer something like sakauzui or something

    Garp and Kuzan, wondering what Sakazuki was planning in his mind, narrowed their eyes at the man with distrust within them.
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    One Piece: White Hunter
    Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Replied to nightwolf2007

    I think in japanese mustache is the same as beard so in reality he’s Whitemustache

    "Big Mom and Kaidou's deeds have gotten out of control. Ignoring our presence, they plundered and killed every single person that they've come across, expanding their influence and asserting their dominance in the New World. And the ones who've been restricting their malicious acts weren't us, but 'Whitebeard' Edward Newgate and his pirate crew!" Sengoku gritted his teeth with evident rage,
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    One Piece: White Hunter
    Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
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  • _Khaled_
    _Khaled_2mth
    Commented

    My boy taught three emperors

    "And here, is where we stay." Doll placed her hand out, with palm facing above, "The Elite Marine Training Facility, built by the personal request of the instructor Zephyr. Just like you three, I only came here around a month ago, but I can tell you with confidence that he is, without a doubt, the best teacher in the whole world."
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    One Piece: White Hunter
    Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
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