Comments of chapter undefined of Highschool DxD: A New Satan
Highschool DxD: A New Satan
Alexander_the_grey
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The decision regarding Moka and Millim rubs me the wrong way. You already built something up and now you offload them on Kal. If they were introduced and the intention was clear from the beginning I don't think anyone would have cared. You are just throwing them away and it is kinda ruining my reading experience.
I don’t even particularly care about the harem aspect, but its still annoying for you to build up relationships for the future, only to decide otherwise in a time skip. I didn’t really care about them being in the harem, but you already built them up as being with him, so it’s a bit lame to just ignore all that and suddenly change it. Also basing his son off of superman, I would’ve made him love one woman. I don’t know why, but I feel it would fit that he would be one of the devil outliers who dont have harems.
can lith adopt raven and gwen and become a father figure to them. that would be an interesting dynamic. also can you not have liths children join kals peerage. have them do anything else just don't make them join kals peerage they are already noble devils there is literally no reason for them to join
A good chapter author, and you know that I appreciate and respect your works and the work involved. . But to certain parts that deserve highlight: Moka, it was literally created and trained (grew as a goal to prove that it deserves to be a member of the Harem) to be one of Lith's lovers and an exchange of feelings of nothing, for his son is disconcerting in good sense and Mirin is understood because her mentality was more childish and innocent, but Moka was portrayed as more mature than a simple teenager who has difficulty managing her sentimental life. . . And having all is sons and daugthers in Kal perage is more like to enforce is posicion as heir than family union, 1 or 2 is o.k, but all of them... Also, swap Mirin with Kal now to give Lith the tame to train another rook than later when she will go to suport her husband, because it'll happen. . As for Scathach, it's just casuality or progression.
