I like it, just don't fall into the trap that a lot of other authors make and focus to much on the children so much that they become the main character instead.

Happy Birthday :) :D

I cant wait until they realize destiny is almost above crystal stage while they are still thinking she's at solid stage [img=recommend]

True

He might still be able to control space, just no where near as good as in the marvel verse, I think when he gets it to source then he can do it anywhere because by then he pretty much creates space itself.

everyone wants a little princess to spoil, male children are just annoying and get in the way in fanfics xD

:( I really love Death of The Endless as a love interest. but now I will feel really bad if he and Hecate break up somehow, you should just give him both, 2 isn't a harem yet. if you cant do that I prefer Death then, I have not seen a fanfic with Death as a love interest at least not a good one.

Awesome I hope they don't have a birth kid and just keep adopting though.. when the main characters have kids the story usually gets ruined because they focus on the kid to much, or make the kid like inherit super OP power from there parents, and they become as strong as there parents when there just born while MC's had to work thousands of years for their power.

Hope Jasmine stops comparing the mc to her brother.. its kind of annoying now.

Syrio's speech at the end gave me chills, such a good chapter.

Cool, I don't really like Luke anyway.

Hope he doesn't have children and if he does it's at the end of the fanfic. Children always ruin the story they either focus on the child to much and basically make them the Main character, or they make the child born overpowered, like being born with the same power level as the father with them doing nothing..

It's happening!! Finally a fanfic with Death of Endless as a love interest. :) :) :D

Is he actually turning into a dragon?

True, but as they are now it's quiet easy to turn there bond into romantic chemistry over time. but your right to.

Apollo just needs to get stronger and he can easily break oaths with order divinity, plus I don't see a problem with him and Artemis, they are already closest to each other and this is a fanfic. That's the point of fanfics, to do something different and change things/ Take liberties with the story.

Arrogant? I don't see how he is arrogant, I think he actually stated that he knows compared to the true powerhouses he is just a speck of dust. If anything I think he has quiet a bit of caution, If anyone is arrogant then Hephaestus is in this chapter..

Wild instinct can be a very good skill if he gets it to high level, it can evolve into a lot of things like enhanced intuition with is basically a limited version of precog

I think if this is handled right it can still be good, he is still very powerful, and I feel what he is saying makes sense, Might as well level up the skills he has instead of creating like 100 more and leaving them at level 1.

The blind man is Genji the main character, Genji Wrapped a cloth around his eyes so he cant see to train his hypersenses, they think he is blind because of it