Comments of chapter undefined of Highschool DxD: A New Satan
Highschool DxD: A New Satan
Alexander_the_grey
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Ohh im so looking foward to Read about those young master type devils like riser, diadora and others trying to mess with the mcs land like they own the place and him starting a inquisition/purging to set an exemple. either with these young masters or others just to keep the plot going Until a certain point. There are a lot Of devils with the chinese version off dementia syndrome also called The Young masters syndrome that is Geneticaly passed from inbred to inbred.
I think I wanna live there, it sounds like a marvelous place. Also, like always, fantastic job with characterisation, your Scáthach truly feels alive. The thing I love the most about this story is, that you strive to actually make every notable character a person, and not a piece of cardboard. You take your time to flesh out small details, quirks and the uniqueness, that an individual develops over the course of their lives without making it seem like a chore to read. This makes your work outstandingly immersive. Thanks again and again for gracing us with your prose! I hope for many more chapters, stories and maybe even originals, cheers!
I wonder if Grayfia will still have the strongest queen title with Scathach being around. Maybe in the future, Lith could organize a rating game between his peerage and Sirzechs...Not only he could give the money from the match to charity but also inspire the young devils to grow stronger. Not to mention firmly set his own peerage as the strongest peerage around...
you characters developed make it more interesting, addictive to read and anticipation for more chapter. there are main topic that can be filled before canon like: 1) peerage (that is already included) 2) lith relation with underworld. 3) lith relation with other pantheon. 4) his involvement with other dying pantheons. 5) after lith take his time at same level as his space, then their a change for ophis to find lith. ( as according canon to ophis was finding people who could help her to beat great red. and other patheons fears her.) as before canon, there is high change for lith to become a conceptual being or nearing it. and thank for the chapter
Great Chapter!!! There are two things that I think could be improved though. One, how are you going to go about making Lith and his peerage immortal? As Scáthach mentioned, devils are long lived, not immortal. So he should find a way to make them immortal. Two, I think that Lith should make his own version of the rating games for his territory as well as others who want to participate. Since his territory has various races, he can implement a sort of peerage star system based on the strength of the peerage leader. Like say a Low-class being has 1 to 3-star strength (for low low-class, mid low-class, high low-class), intermediate-class being is 4 to 6-star, high-class being is 7-9 stars, and so on. People would first have to get checked up in both demonic (or any other energy source) strength and physical body strength before being assigned a star rating so people with strong bodies won't get an upper hand when facing people who specialize on their energy instead of their body as well as prevent cheating (like using the king pieces in rating games). Then we can say a peerage of a high class being can have members that total up to 10-stars (or whatever you decide) and a satan class or super class can have a higher limit. Then instead of only fighting, you can have these peerages compete in other stuff like races, obstacle courses, video games. Sort of like gaming clubs where they can also have back up members for people who can't compete and stuff. I think this would make his territory even more lively and interesting than it already is. It would also give the middle finger to all of those old fossils in the devil council who only favor pureblood devils and who like to rig the games. Anyway, it just sounds like an interesting thing to implement so the MC can have his own Azaroth Games before Azazel gets his. Keep up the good work!
This is my current favorite on going fic. I love the characterization and detail you put into the people you surround lith with and I love all the detail on his lands and Azura specifically. You are doing and Amazing job with this story! I feel like you are missing an assassin type member but you might be using Hel as that idk, but to have a good assassin in your peerage seems wise.
brilliant way of showing off everything that has changed over the years without shoving it down our throats. I'm intrigued to see how other devils from the outside see Lith and his territory, since anyone out there would likely either see it as something to strive for, or attempt to slander him and his lands to make themselves look and feel better.
Great Red => True Dragon God - Dreams & Ilusion. Ophis => Dragon God - Infinity... Lith => True Devil God - Space, Time & Gravity. Lucifer => Devil God - ... As Lith make is own pantheon, use space, time e gravity to separate and expand is lands, criating is own God territory. Him as Chief God and Serafall as God' Queen.