Comments of chapter undefined of High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

my first gut reaction to this chapter is that you really need to "Showing us" the events that are happening, not just giving an info dump to "Tell Us". There was barely even any dialogue in this chapter and a heck of a lot of summary. And that's ignoring the fact that again, its just plain old canon DXD for the most part.

This wasn't a chapter, this is a several chapters of content summarized.

the journey through the supernatural world was much more interesting, it's already kind of forced his fights is kokabiel, like he even looks like some fetish, he's kind of now like a spectator in DXD, let's talk more about his inventions, so far the only thing that it was kind of clear was the library index, which was created by his wife and the computer made by her.

when will any changes to canon come....and we want to see erik not rias, sona or issei

the meaning of the chapter: Eric Ravenclaw is a dues ex Plot armor for the MC Issei. .

Is the Mc going to switch to issei cause ?

Thanks for the chapter

First!

bah tens of chapters with flashback that i would loved if they were put at the beginning and not after some 60 chapters because imp it felt like reading spoilers and then the previous backstory ...now we got the canon followed for no reason even more when erik said he wanted to beat kokabiel same with the forced kiba drama ..i was so hopeful for this story

gracias por el capitulo

Filler

xp

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Amazing keep up the good work

Where are the bonus chapters!!! I am still waiting for them!!!

thanks for the chapter

Gracias por el capitulo

Thanks for the chapter