Comments of chapter undefined of High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

Some criticism, not trying to be mean just sharing my honest thoughts. There was literally no information in this chapter that any reader who reached this far into the story would not be aware of. The past several chapters have been nothing more than a rehashing of Canon events with mostly ver minor changes. The only change of any importance has been Issei not being Reincarnated, however it's obvious by the way things are progressing that it will still happen. Honestly while showing other POVs and stuff can be great and enhance a story, the past several chapters haven't added anything to the story and feel like pure filler. It feels like the kind of needless rehashing that an editor would cut out before publishing. I really feel a lot of it could have been easily cut out, skimmed over, or summarized without losing anything. Not trying to bash or anything, I just honestly feel like they haven't added anything and are instead bogging down the story and slowing the pace down needlessly. Anyway I'm still looking forward to how things will go from here.

I kinda feel like nothing has happened in 160 chapters. Sure he got some wives that aren't really fleshed out, he has some kids that aren't introduced at all. He has some magic stuff that isn't fleshed out at all. He has a company that isn't fleshed out. This story just isn't very good. Like seriously, what has happened in 160 chapters? I've been following this since you had like 15 chapters or something and now it's time for me to drop this. Good luck.

This entire chapter could be explained in a single sentence, "Rias went on to explain how peerages work and some things about devil society." As said by some others, we already know all that stuff as anyone this far into the story has at least a passing familiarity to DxD. Totally useless info dump.

You drag this to long Come on dude, it's 5/6 chaps already and you still what? In issei part?

Just waste so many useless chapters :(

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

where was Issei's gaze throughout the conversation...

Sinceramente , não quero digitar um texto de 1k porque não tem sentido . Mas se fosse 2 capítulos por dia eu até não reclamaria por essas informações que qualquer um que vem ler FF de DxD sabe . Mas esperar 1 dia por nada é simplesmente 'idiota' . Queria saber oque você estava pensando quando escreveu esses capítulos ? Na hora você achou que seria bem recebido pelos leitores ou simplemsmete não deu a minima ? Não estou tentando deixar você desanimado nem nada , mas você como LEITOR gostaria de esperar 1 dia inteiro para ler isso ? Me diga seus pensamentos .

Great chapter, keep up the awesome work 😍

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!! I just remember hoping Luna was one of Erik's wives.( google translator)

thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

Gracias por el capitulo

thanks for the chapter