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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anthony01
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First

Asura_Vajra
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Wilhelm when a god assumes he'll follow their command just because of their status:

Peace12345
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HAHAHAHA scared her off with her mother. Nice!!

Loolix
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Wilhelm confirming again that the mother cards works against these siblings

I_dont_believe_it
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Going all out I dont think he would lose, i know he probably couldnt beat her yet but he wouldnt lose

Canele
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Thanks for the chapter ~ tl;dr Amaterasu: Join my faction, no refusal is accepted Wil: IZZY!!!! Your daughter is bullying me! *Red thong goddess runs away*

Bill_Ribles
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Hey author can you make Will fight in his balance breaker against the dragon slayers from fairytail

KissMyGloriousAxe
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I'm surprised he never brought up who his father is as a reason for declining. Seems like having a Zechs as a father; would make him a bit of a hot potato politically- Considering the Shinto have nobody in the top 10; which Zechs is on the higher end of now. Also her threats are basically empty. Even if she did succeed in killing him; which is unlikely since he'd just use juggernaut drive if needed- Her entire Pantheon would end up in a war with the devils; with Sirzech's spearheading it. Well if that did happen; I'd really feel bad for Izanami. It would really suck to have your daughter kill a good friend; only to have his father come at your entire family for vengeance.

Lord_Delta
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AlexTravels
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Will, trolling your "friend's" daughter is mean~

Lunarian_King
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where is the second one???? you promised!!!

Gman2123
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Will to Sirzechs: Who’s your Daddy?

fianlking
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all i have to say is thank u for the chapter it made me laugh when im haveing one of the worst days of this year so thanks

Mimirum
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Thanks for the chapter

Badzingan
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Thanks.. Oyakodon..???

Einstein3
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Yasaka: Will, please be respectful. Will: I respectfully praise your choice of undergarments.

_Monarch
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thanks for the chapter author-san ☺️

Zarden
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@AStoryForOne You know, this might be my favorite fanfiction on the site. It’s such a simple starting concept but the execution is amazing. I love how you explain things from a technical point of view and don’t leave it as “it works because of plot”.

ThiccThighs
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thx for chap

ManasCiel
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Thanks for the chapter.

AlexTravels
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So coud you tell, what worlds Will is going to visit? New ones, I mean. Marvel, Bleach, Fairy tail, One PIece?