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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Trpstars74
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I won't lie i'm looking forward to mordred's reaction to find out about her now step Dad or mom because she always call artoria father

Trpstars74
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I write a commen about the story re writing my opinion and thought nothing bad of course go chack it out write me back about what you think

ChesterCure:yo, do you remember me? do you still read transcending paragon? if yes then I made a rewrite of it.
Peace12345
Peace12345Lv5Peace12345

Okay just one thing. He is literally lightning incarnate now. His speed should at least rival Achilles. Him not being able to keep up is kind of lame. Also his sword made from Scathach's spear should be able to pierce his skin so next time they meet Achilles is kind of screwed.

Boroxx
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Isnt the overall power level completely messed up? You know the mc trained with Scathach’s main body and is fairly powerful but here he struggles to take on a servant. A servant only has a fraction of the heroic spirits power while Scathach should be many times stronger than your avarage heroic spirit. Just wondering since if servants are this powerful wont heroic spirits be on the level of UO’s ophis great red and them? …

MikeKung
MikeKungLv13MikeKung

I am curious though. How come the mc doesn’t know about the priest or the great holy grail war in general? He used to be Zelretch, surely he should have seen the war with his keliodoscope? I mean he can even know about Issei but he doesn’t know about the war that happens in his own universe?

Mamonga_az
Mamonga_azLv2Mamonga_az

Thank you for the Chapter!

eccentricbeing18
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Koda_sitou
Koda_sitouLv3Koda_sitou

I'm curious about the meeting between Mordred and Will

Boroxx
BoroxxLv11Boroxx

Is the mc ever going to get “stronger” i honestly dont see the need to read this story anymore if the author starts to blatantly reverse black and white just to always keep the mc weaker than the opponent no matter how far the difference between them is

Fahim_Shahriar
Fahim_ShahriarLv4Fahim_Shahriar

Author I can't help but think you are downplaying primordial runes. To see how powerful they are you just need to look at Skadi. With these runes, she can employ numerous spells including a divine curse capable of rendering both Napoleon and Mash inert without them being able to lift a single finger. I repeat paralyzing a heroic spirit with magic resistance. Both Surtr and Skadi could also inscribe a primordial rune of death, which is said to bring inescapable death to any living being. He could have simply killed Achilles with a rune of death why bother going through all the trouble Skadi can also use her runes to hold Sigurd's and Brynhildr's Spirit Cores together after they had been damaged, the core their soul's nucleus. Even though the bonds were fragile. She can also use her Primordial Runes to simultaneously summon a large number of Divine Iron Shields, strong enough to aid, alongside the rest of Ritsuka's party, Berserker Heracles to momentarily hold back Surtr's Loptr Laegjarn. Holding back a divine construct that can incinerate the surface of the earth. yes, they are that powerful. Then there's the spell Ochd deug Odin, which he could easily use to invoke Odin's authority on a microscale due to bearing Odin's blessing. Using only elemental magecraft with primordial rune when there are plenty of blessings and curses available.......I can't help but think that he is not being efficient. You can always use the nasuverse rune index in "Sufficient velocity" for inspiration. They have some awesome spells there. Sorry if it came out as a rant. But I like your story please keep up the good work up and sorry again if my words came out to be a bit rude

eccentricbeing18
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DVD
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Just because Will has something that allows him to be lighting incarnate does not mean he has reached that level yet. Plus the spell maker could not under stand the speed of lighting and just thought because of the greater control of lighting they were the incarnation of it.

Samien
SamienLv7Samien

Yeah let mommy spoil you

Daoist591682
Daoist591682Lv5Daoist591682

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder, when will you power up Sir Wiggles? After all the time that bunny has been in the plot, at least make Sir Wiggles have some relevance in this arc.

BattleKing10000
BattleKing10000Lv5BattleKing10000

yeah he needs to get stronger faster

WistRal
WistRalLv4WistRal

Bro, The troll lives on

Fahim_Shahriar
Fahim_ShahriarLv4Fahim_Shahriar

Who told you that divine contracts can't be created by humans, just look at Muramasa. Although his divine constructs' side effect backlash kills him, he proved that it is still posssible for humans to create them, though they might not be able to use the construct without a penalty, creating them is still possible

Fahim_Shahriar
Fahim_ShahriarLv4Fahim_Shahriar

Who told you that divine contracts can't be created by humans, just look at Muramasa. Although his divine constructs' side effect backlash kills him, he proved that it is still posssible for humans to create them, though they might not be able to use the construct without a penalty, creating them is still possible

OfficialDavidDough
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great chapter!

BattleKing10000
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Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Increible. Gracias por el capitulo