AStoryForOne
I won't lie i'm looking forward to mordred's reaction to find out about her now step Dad or mom because she always call artoria father
I write a commen about the story re writing my opinion and thought nothing bad of course go chack it out write me back about what you think
ChesterCure:yo, do you remember me? do you still read transcending paragon? if yes then I made a rewrite of it.
Isnt the overall power level completely messed up? You know the mc trained with Scathach’s main body and is fairly powerful but here he struggles to take on a servant. A servant only has a fraction of the heroic spirits power while Scathach should be many times stronger than your avarage heroic spirit. Just wondering since if servants are this powerful wont heroic spirits be on the level of UO’s ophis great red and them? …
Author I can't help but think you are downplaying primordial runes. To see how powerful they are you just need to look at Skadi. With these runes, she can employ numerous spells including a divine curse capable of rendering both Napoleon and Mash inert without them being able to lift a single finger. I repeat paralyzing a heroic spirit with magic resistance. Both Surtr and Skadi could also inscribe a primordial rune of death, which is said to bring inescapable death to any living being. He could have simply killed Achilles with a rune of death why bother going through all the trouble Skadi can also use her runes to hold Sigurd's and Brynhildr's Spirit Cores together after they had been damaged, the core their soul's nucleus. Even though the bonds were fragile. She can also use her Primordial Runes to simultaneously summon a large number of Divine Iron Shields, strong enough to aid, alongside the rest of Ritsuka's party, Berserker Heracles to momentarily hold back Surtr's Loptr Laegjarn. Holding back a divine construct that can incinerate the surface of the earth. yes, they are that powerful. Then there's the spell Ochd deug Odin, which he could easily use to invoke Odin's authority on a microscale due to bearing Odin's blessing. Using only elemental magecraft with primordial rune when there are plenty of blessings and curses available.......I can't help but think that he is not being efficient. You can always use the nasuverse rune index in "Sufficient velocity" for inspiration. They have some awesome spells there. Sorry if it came out as a rant. But I like your story please keep up the good work up and sorry again if my words came out to be a bit rude
Who told you that divine contracts can't be created by humans, just look at Muramasa. Although his divine constructs' side effect backlash kills him, he proved that it is still posssible for humans to create them, though they might not be able to use the construct without a penalty, creating them is still possible
Who told you that divine contracts can't be created by humans, just look at Muramasa. Although his divine constructs' side effect backlash kills him, he proved that it is still posssible for humans to create them, though they might not be able to use the construct without a penalty, creating them is still possible