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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

AnubisAkiraDFenrir
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one thing, regarding the system of heaven and devils, are you sure that the pain at the mention of all that is holy is just part of their bloodline? Oppai Dragon asked Michael to make it so that the Church Trio could pray, and Michael set it up in the Heaven System.

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Xx_Chump99_xX
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So Pyrrha's going to lose in the tournament then... Huh, that'd actually give her good character development ya know?

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daoist832572
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Zerot_Solar
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Thanks for the chapter!

MaximusDM
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Harem member identified

RogueCrescent
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Is it wrong I want neo in the small harem, Thanks for the chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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As interesting as it is to see Roman and Wilhelm BS together, where is this going? Skyrim at least had him learn a few things, get some useful knowledge, meet a goddess, etc. Here, he's already unlocked his aura and learned how to do it himself so he can do it for others. He's acquired Dust, and knows how to get more. The only thing of true note / power left in this world is him nabbing Salem as his latest waifu and taking her to a new world to get around her "curse". I really hope it doesn't take very long for that to happen, as the dxd and random stuff in the Fate u-verse with Zelretch, Artoria, and Rin was much more interesting. And I'm still waiting for Wilhelm to be true to form and start trolling the people who've tried to mess with him.

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The_All_in_One
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AMAZING CHAPTER, AUTHOR

JmJgJh
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I wonder if ozpin or salem will detect magic power on MC or maybe they already did ... Or if ozpin would detect that ruby weapon with orichalcum is good mana conductor (or something) ...

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CILinkz
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i really like this story :D thanks for the chapter

Lucikiel
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Gracias por el capitulo

sin_of_memes
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can someone give an example of the power level of RWBY.

Everworld12
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Yay phyrra! +1 to the group, but take her out if necessary to put rias in..!

Elerial
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thank for the chapter

ThiccThighs
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Thx for chap

Shurasik
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Thanks for the chapter

Arsene_Holmes
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Thanks for the chapter

EntityLXX
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First time a harem protagonist says that he is spoken for. LOL.

AlexTravels
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Well, if Roman and Will will be(lol) working together, than Cinder will come to both of them? My-my, that would be interesting... And her thighs... I see.

Ryve
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too addicting