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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

weeb_army_soldier
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F_Nightingale
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Boroxx
BoroxxLv11Boroxx

Try get the mc to calm down abit if possible. I feel like with the amount of memories and knowledge the mc has in his head he shouldn’t be so quick to anger especially about something he already knows like his own lack of skill. The majority of the novel so far is great but the mcs character starts feeling alot like child that gets angry whenever something doesnt go his way and even may lose control any time like how he did in dxd and skyrim and basicly came off as a over emotional angsty teen. While i know you mentioned his devil side and dragon heart etc but with hundreds if not thousands of years of memories his way of thinking and acting should atleast be a little bit mature and calm like heck he even had a emotional outburst against himself even tough he knows better… Dont get me wrong, this chapter itself isnt that extreme but its still making the mc come over as a more and more angsty teenager by the more chapters that pass. While I understand that the mc is only like 15 or 16 years old right now but i refuse to believe having the memories of a antique like zelretch wont have any impact on his character or at the very least make him act mature calm and accepting like recognizing that you need training instead of getting angry or counting to three and remember that you love rin like a granddaughter before you go full rage mode at yourself. I like the novel, but atm your just writing “angsty child with kaleidoscope” and outside of childishness and rashness i cant give the mc any other real personality traits atm and zelretch memories seem completely irrelevant in anything except for giving him access to the kaleidoscope. No offense meant with this post just stating my opinion

MAGE_OF_FLOWER
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angra_mainyu
angra_mainyuLv1angra_mainyu

Good Chapter

EntityLXX
EntityLXXLv12EntityLXX

Yeah. Gotta say, everyone saw that Friendship of the Thighs coming. Still skeptic as to whether or not she'll be joining the harem since she has her duties and she pretty much doesn't care about living all that much.

Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2Bakimaru

Ok we get it, he's utterly lacking in skills. Don't have to beat it over and over. You can always just give his fancy sword to a more deserving character.

Daoist_Regulus
Daoist_RegulusLv5Daoist_Regulus

thanks for the chapter

Zrave_1508
Zrave_1508Lv3Zrave_1508

waifu and a teacher at the same time and thnx for the chapter

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Gracias por el capitulo

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

Samien
SamienLv7Samien

Yosh sishou

CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4CamlEnvy

Único problema de verdade é ela aceita ele como Discípulo , ela não aceita qualquer "merda" , mas com o poder do autor tudo vai dar certo xD.

FluffyHaremPlz
FluffyHaremPlzLv4FluffyHaremPlz

Scathach wife get.

Monotheistic
MonotheisticLv10Monotheistic

Using the same basic spells over and over doesn't he have other spells?

Kuroki_Shishiro
Kuroki_ShishiroLv13Kuroki_Shishiro

Author do you have something to tell us? Do you swing that way?

RogueCrescent
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Thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Arsene_Holmes
Arsene_HolmesLv1Arsene_Holmes

Thanks for the chapter

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Alenzure
AlenzureLv13Alenzure

Thanks for chaps dude