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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

weeb_army_soldier
weeb_army_soldierLv13weeb_army_soldier

If you're gonna make this a harem, please don't make it a Pokemon collecting one with like 20 girls, please do at most 5-6

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Ciel1786
Ciel1786Lv4Ciel1786

If you need training, go to HER! GO TO THIGHS SHISOU!

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Feruru
FeruruLv4Feruru

This fanfic is just like any other Nasuverse fanfic. If you don't know Type-Moon, you will lose brain cells. Well, at least this means it's good fanfic.

Yeison_Betancourt
Yeison_BetancourtLv4Yeison_Betancourt

Thx bro

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Zerot_Solar
Zerot_SolarLv6Zerot_Solar

Daoist853220
Daoist853220Lv4Daoist853220

Shishou is Good Civilization.

bluS24
bluS24Lv5bluS24

Like how strong are those threats are they as powerful as Great Red and Ophis or more powerful?

Clerith
ClerithLv1Clerith

Cool and all, but I'm still absolutely abhorring Rin and Saber's presence here. These vulnerable secrets, all blurted out in the open, the MC and Kischur's dialogue broken by Rin's "explain this to me (and the readers)" injections, I really dislike it. Rin and Saber will probably be some sort of maybe companions in the Fate travels, but I still don't like their presence right here, right now. I don't have any issues with the plot, reveals or direction (other that than TYPEs never live up to the hype, or that protagonists always beat them in the end, and there's always Grain), but Rin's presence is just really grating to me.

_ZAX_
_ZAX_Lv4_ZAX_

is Jester trying to awaken the Spider? on the side note Alaya is sure not doing his job against the threat on humans, smh

ADD
ADDLv5ADD

Wow, even his birth and purpose was planned, and he silly thinking he was free after running away from the demons

1Dreamer_Owl
1Dreamer_OwlLv41Dreamer_Owl

Victor_Moura_
Victor_Moura_Lv3Victor_Moura_

I don't understand why they put so much effort into defeating Type-mercury when it wakes up humanity has already been doomed after all the steelland survivors don't even qualify as human the true humans won't adapt the only survivors are genetically engineered species whose majority does not have a remotely human appearance in fact they will go to war with the last human survivors the only viable solution seems to be to completely avoid the promised time through actions that could allow the coexistence of humanity and the planet I know it doesn't look so cool compared to fighting an immortal alien that distorts reality but works

stultusXU
stultusXULv12stultusXU

never even thought of type mercury, is this the Note world line?

FluffyHaremPlz
FluffyHaremPlzLv4FluffyHaremPlz

bro I just want to see a girl from fate who's not normally used in fanfics in the harem(Scathach is an exception) like viritra, Ibuki Dōji, Cleopatra or the Sakura Five

mitch_mitch40
mitch_mitch40Lv13mitch_mitch40

so all that and he's not getting any training?

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

No entiendo nada. Gracias por el capitulo

GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3GawkGawk

never liked fate just the servants, their powers and the magics

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4Lazyboi

Is Arcuid going to make an appearance down the line in this fanfic?

CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4CamlEnvy

Não existe ninguém melhor em todo o universo em ensinar alguém do que Shishou . Scatach é a deusa do ensinamento é tortu-cof* treinamento .