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ughh.. that was anticlimactic.. what happen to the faceslapping??? Why did MC give his invention away to people that treats him like he doesn't exist??? what's next? every time he makes something is he going to give it to them?? then that's just no better than the gremorys being nothing but leeches.. MC should just cut ties with them and move on with his life..
Hmmm this story was really nice kinda new setting of him not hating his family(just don't care about them anymore) but then this devil's society(family)??? Happened... He can just marry and do nothing to the wife, he can just divorce her and all. He can craft something to cut off the contract as well. Pretty sure odin or asgard can help him with it or help forging it. But no he kinda begged(IMo) and he even gave his manual for the painting... Worthless that one. Now that I see mc is kinda spineless not like 100% but like 30 to 40. Idk why he is so affriad of his daddy. His daddy is just one of the Nobel in devil's society that I may add not that high in whole world sclae. It's mc's father who should not want to be mc's enemy not the other way around. It's the family who should be asking for forgiveness for what they did to the MC. But no. Shame. Shame. Shame.
kinda disappointed there. i didnt get the result i want. atleast he knows that he was still weak and need protection from strong rain and winds. he was just accumulating his strenght. when will he start in his conquest of being op? he should also ask for his devil pieces so that he can gather his pieces and make a super op team.
Hola autor. Creo que una jugada maestra habría sido que Zeoticus mencionara que ya estaba comprometido con Ravel. Así el protagonista tendría que pelear con la familia Phenex y Riser en particular, acercándolo al canon en el futuro. Además creo que sería genial que se llevará a la nobleza de Riser y Diodora, y reclute a algunas personas que no aparecen hasta mediados de la historia o después, o mueren. Ejemplos; Reynare y sus compañeras angeles caídos, Ingvild Leviathan y Katerea Leviathan, entre otros. POR ULTIMO, pero no menos importante, creo que deberías de hacer que el protagonista cree NOBLE PHANTASM, ya que después de todo su fuerte es la artesanía y los materiales y métodos para hacer la mayoría todavía existen en Dxd. Solo imagina lo genial que sería si crea y usa los NOBLE PHANTASM de por ejemplo Sigfried y hace que todos se pregunten cómo lo hizo, o el cielo crea que es una reencarnación de Yavé, mejor aún imagina que crea algo como EXCALIBUR y recluta a Jeanne y se lo da. Creo que sería divertido, por supuesto debes de hacer que le tome tiempo y esfuerzo, además de materiales y viajar a los lugares donde supuestamente nacieron esos tesoros y habilidades.
MC should still make a way to work around his powers/genes ever getting stolen since if he ever goes against his father's wishes then there would always be a possibility of MC having his powers gone. Especially if Millicas ever becomes the head in the future. Grayfia could tell his son to banish MC, then all his powers go byebye.