xan5104
First couple chapters in and i already love It. as another author, your use of language and the dialogue the characters have is just amazing. keep it up
I'm about to start reading chap 3 but it looks really good right now. the only thing that I don't like to much is the long big words or words that are to much for reading. they don't have to be fancy to me anyways because it seems like it's slowing the reading down for me. AND I really think these 2 should be together and they should stay together don't make either of them die off because that move is done by a lot of writers and I think it sucks.